Sometimes

in life, love, poem category

Sometimes it’s better to just keep quiet

Because when you say something it doesn’t make sense

Sometimes it’s better to keep your feelings in

 Because when you try to express yourself no one understands

Sometimes it’s just better to smile

Because when you don’t people ask why?

The life that we live is a secret to everyone else

No one knows why or how.

We don’t understand others, not even ourselves

We sometimes believe life is impossible to live

And that it has no point..

And maybe your right, it doesn’t But in the end, there will always be someone there.

Someone who will stick by your side and never let go, Never give up and never tell you no

We all need that other person, and believe me you will find that person

 That “someone” will be your other half

Your other heart, your hand to hold, and your mended soul.

Comments

Justin Allen ♦ Tue, 12/01/2009 - 20:01
But in the end, there will always be someone there. Someone who will stick by your side and never let go, My favorite lines. Even tho life is hard someone will always be there for you always.
Su94 ♦ Tue, 12/01/2009 - 23:29
Thank you so much for reading and enjoying my write:)
open writer ♦ Fri, 11/27/2009 - 20:13
yeah life can suck
Passion Heart ♦ Thu, 11/26/2009 - 21:12
good poem *****
Maury ♦ Wed, 11/25/2009 - 07:37
love the poem
Urbanist ♦ Tue, 11/24/2009 - 19:40
great, "Sometimes it’s just better to smile" "Because when you don’t people ask why" happens to me all the time and it's not that I'm in a bad mood it's just that I don't have anything to smile about. I really like this poem because it's real. "Sometimes it’s better to keep your feelings in" I also like this line as well because a lot of times you may want to open up to someone but when you do or if you do you get your feelings hurt so you were probably better off keeping your feelings inside because they didn't feel the same about you.
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